Proof of Human
Personhood is not something you have here. It is something you continuously prove, every morning, to a machine that keeps the only copy of the answer.
High in Rezo Thorn, a seven-kilometre megacity of stacked strata, Gwen is a curated masterpiece: an influencer whose every heartbeat trades on the open market, and whose personhood is a credential she pays to keep.
Every morning her neural lace renews the attestation. Sentience, sapience, stability. Every morning the machine agrees she exists, and the day can begin.
She is also something else: a weapon-brand, a second self, a contract waiting to be activated. When the proof that she is human is revoked, the fall is total, from the gleaming heights to the Vaults where the city's discarded survive off-grid and even authenticity can be a brand. To climb back she will have to become her weapon-self in body as well as name, in a city that watches everything and forgives nothing.
Proof of Human is a descent through every layer of the megacity, and every answer Rezo offers to the question of what makes a person real.
Contents
Life, Camera, Trend
Seven chapters, and the whole of them is a fall. It begins at the top of the city, where being watched is the same thing as being alive.
Open Part One →Ghost in the Ledger
Seven chapters, below the line the city draws under the people it still counts.
ComingThe Price of PUMP
Seven chapters, and the bill for everything Part Two borrowed.
ComingRedemption Protocol
Eight chapters. The road back, and what it costs to walk it.
ComingThe book is the website
Proof of Human is not going to be an ebook. It is published here, chapter by chapter, because the story is told partly in interface: the readouts Gwen lives inside, the attestations she renews, the feeds that report on her. On a page those are set in italics and hope for the best. Here they are what they are.
So the heads-up display is silent, and meant to be read. The only things that will ever speak are the broadcasts, and in this world the broadcasts are the layer that lies.
Chapters go up about once a week. Nothing is behind a login, and there is nothing to buy.
What you are looking at
Some of what follows is not prose. Each kind has its own mark, and the marks never change, so you only have to learn them once. Colour tells you whose layer you are looking at; the mark tells you what kind of thing it is. The colours shift as the story moves between points of view. The marks do not.
- Addressed to you, the reader
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PlaceWhere you are. A location tag opens every scene, and gives its address in the city: ring, sector and level.
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SystemCivic broadcasts, epigraphs and notices, standing outside the story. Nobody in the scene is reading these. You are.
- Her heads-up display
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ReadoutWhat the machines are measuring, moment to moment. Ambient, constant, and silent by design.
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CommandHer instructing the machine rather than reading it. The one place in the HUD where she is the one issuing.
- Coming in from elsewhere
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LaceSomeone talking to her privately, inside her head. Her own replies sit on the right.
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MailCorrespondence from outside the lace. Sent earlier, read now, and answerable in her own time.
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InvitationMail with a date attached, and sometimes a place. The same inbox, a different kind of thing in it.
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BroadcastThe feed, talking to everyone at once. The only layer that will ever have a voice, and the only one you should not trust.
- A screen in the room
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DisplaySomebody else's terminal, read over their shoulder. Not her lace and not yours, which is why it is the one thing here that never changes colour.
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One note when a new chapter goes up, plus new films and tracks across the worlds.
Go deeper
Rezo Thorn
The stepped megacity the book climbs and then falls through, cross-sectioned stratum by stratum with the city's own art.
Enter the city → The ideaA Taxonomy of Bodies
What the verification wall is testing, where the threshold sits, and the five classes that fall below it.
Read the codex → Who's whoThe cast
Gwen and her weapon-self, Jiff the Gardener, and Honey the swarm-construct. Spoiler-light.
Meet them → New hereStart with The Ledger
What this universe is, how it works, and the shortest route into it.
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